Paste-up of the volume, taking the form of typeset poems pasted onto separate pages, with page numbers added by hand. These page numbers and other alterations and corrections made in blue ink are probably by Garfitt himself, who also reorders some of the poems, and has added one note to the printer in black ink. Precise instructions on page layout have been added in various colours; these are probably by Priscilla Eckhard, who designed the book's jacket, and whose general instructions regarding layout and measurements are pasted to the front sheet. Some of the proof-reader's corrections have also been incorporated here, and Schmidt's hand is evident in places. Further mark-up probably originated at the printing house. The proofs have been stamped as passed for press. With delivery note from the printers dated 30 September 1974.