Revised early draft of Act III Scene 1 [which later became the middle of Act II]. Towards the end of the volume there is a draft letter to John [Clements?]. Notes on plot development on end piece. Undated.
Drawings in ink and pencil include:
- Old Devius on bed looking down at Humphrey Trellis;
- head of woman;
- life drawings of female nudes;
- artists at their easels.
Appears to have been written prior to the Sally Devius manuscripts Add MS 88931/3/1/4-6. In this draft Kite is called Shirt, October Trellis is Humphrey Trellis and Dr Moulter is Dr Willy.