Revised autograph draft, in ink. 'Notes on final chapters' on f.26. Lists of possible titles on f.73. Dated 29 July 1949, Sark.
Drawings in ink include:
- f.9: bird flying;
- f.30: male figure [Bright Carver?];
- f.43: boy with arrow and Native American headdress;
- f.69v: the Thing holding a bird (full-length figure and detail of head);
- f.72: male head [Steerpike?].